The Sales Booster (aka the Copy Critique)

What if you *knew* what was costing you conversions - and how to change it?

Hand over your landing page, website copy or emails and I’ll tell you how to optimize the copy for conversions

Sure, you *could* keep resorting to blog posts for copy advice...

But you don’t want generic, one-size-fits-all advice from someone who *may* (or may not) know a thing or two about copywriting.  

No, no. You need personalized feedback from an expert who’s spent hundreds of hours training the art and science of conversion copywriting.

An expert who knows things like… the Rule of One… the “so what” and “prove it” tests…. AIDA and PAS formulas… the serial position effect… the bizarreness effect… the novelty effect… 

An expert who can look at your copy and tell you exactly what you need to do to take your prospects from “maybe…” to “HELL YES!”

10X Sales Pages

Get actionable, high-converting feedback on your copy

In the Sales Booster, I’ll get out my magnifying glass and scrutinize every inch of your sales copy to find out what’s working…and what’s not. 

Then I’ll get back to you with suggestions on how to make your copy convert like a madwoman. 

And no, not suggestions like “hmm, I think that this word miiiiight sound better.” 

No, no. I’ll give you unfiltered feedback based on conversion copy techniques, proven formulas, psychology and your data. Feedback that digs waaaaay beneath the surface. 

So you know exactly how to craft copy that tugs on your reader’s heartstrings, touches on their deepest pain points and hesitations, and gets them *excited* to buy from you. 

I’ll also explain the *why* behind my recommendations, so you won’t be left wondering. 

Added bonus? I’ll rewrite one key section of your copy, so you’ll walk away with an *immediate* copy upgrade (no brain power required). 

"But...a copywriter already wrote my copy"

That’s great! And I don’t doubt that the copy–and your conversions–is good. 

But even so, an extra set of pro copywriter eyes can make the difference between *good* conversions and “OMG I didn’t even know this was possible” conversions.  

"...I actually got more students, more leads, more people booking calls with me."

"Ok, so who are you anyway?"

Yup, that would be me in Pompeii

Hey! I’m Mary. Conversion copywriter for SaaS and tech companies. Digital nomad. Coffee snob (I blame it on living in Colombia).


I’ve also…

+ been trained by the world’s best copywriters (liiiiike Joanna Wiebe and Ry Schwartz) 

+ spent hundreds of hours studying the art and science of high-converting copy. 

+ gotten (and continue to get) my *own* copy critiqued on the reg by the world’s top copywriters. 

What copy do you need to conversion-ize?

I can review one of the following…

Your long-form sales page
Your email sequence (up to 5 emails)
Your website (up to 3 pages)
Your Facebook ads (up to 5 ads)

You get WAY more than just a copy critique

You’ll walk away with actionable feedback based on conversion copy best practices and customized to YOUR business. You’ll get…

+ Feedback on the: 

→ messaging hierarchy

→ copywriting and wording

→ persuasion techniques

→ offer

→ formatting & design 


+ A comprehensive Loom video walking you through all my suggestions 

+ A Google sheet compiling those suggestions (so you don’t have to worry about note-taking) 

+ A Google doc with recommended copy changes for one key section 

+ A 30-minute live Q & A session where you can ask me any questions you have

All that…delivered in 48 hours. 


Wanna see how it's done?

Then take a look at this mini sales page critique I recently did. 

Keep in mind that this video is a small sample of the review that you’d get! The Sales Booster is more in-depth, based on your data, and loaded with many more copy suggestions. 

My feedback has even helped other copywriters...

Mary offered fantastic insights into my sales page. She helped me clarify my messaging and optimize my page for better conversions. As a copywriter myself, I understand the value of getting a second pair of eyes on any offer. What I didn’t expect to discover was that elements of my own copy didn’t relay the value of my offer as succinctly as I hoped. This has been a hugely valuable experience for me and I recommend Mary’s evaluation to anyone looking to launch or boost conversions - even if you are a copywriter.
Abi Prendergast
Conversion Copywriter

In just 48 hours, you'll know what's tanking your conversions (and how to fix it)

Here’s how it works: 

1. You fill out a form

2. I review your copy

3. You ask me Qs

4. You make the edits

Once you purchase The Sales Booster, I’ll ask you to answer a few questions on your success metrics, challenges and target audience. That’ll help me give feedback that’s personalized to YOU and your brand. 

With your answers and data in hand, I’ll analyze your copy and provide customized, actionable suggestions. I’ll also make copy changes to one key section and then put everything in a Google Drive folder for you to review.

After you review everything, we’ll chat for 30 minutes and you can ask me any questions you have about the feedback and next steps. 

Implementation time! Armed with my high-converting feedback, you and your team go and make the copy changes that’ll convince your ideal customers YOUR product is the best choice for them. 

Most people reading this will keep losing sales

They might go and make some haphazard tweaks to their copy (without knowing how they’ll impact conversions). 

They might even hire a cheap copywriter on Upwork. A darn good “creative writer” who majored in English–but doesn’t know a thing about writing copy that *converts.* 

And worst of all? They’ll continue to wonder things like…

Why isn’t this landing page converting?? 

Why is my CTR (still!) so darn low? 

Is my messaging clear enough? 

And they’ll continue to miss out on subscribers, customers and sales.

Wanna seal a different fate? 

One that gets you…

  • More subscribers 
  • More customers 
  • And more sales? 

Then click that pretty purple button below and book the Sales Booster. 


"...that was incredible"